Charmed 9x01: "Charmed Goes Gaga" Part 1 - Read it Now!

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Download Part 1 here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/0gc62n
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Sorry if the english is not perfect!

Part 2 is coming soon (Jan/Febr 2013)

Credits:

Idea by: Bobby/ AwakenedWitch

Written by: Dennis/ ds7c (most of it)

Bobby/ Awakenedwitch (some parts)


It bases on a (true) story! Lady Gaga said in interviews that she felt followed by a ghost during the "Monster Ball Tour"

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[AngelofWicca]

Bobby & Dennis you guys are so creative! As I read the "Gaga" part I was like this is a joke. but so interesting! I love it very extordinary.

[GellarProdz]

WOW!It's amazing I so much love the first banner!Who made it?

[ds7c]

WOW!It's amazing I so much love the first banner!Who made it?

Thank you Bobby made it!

[Siennaleah]

This looks so real, amazing, can't wait to read this

[Oved011Again]

The idea and the thought of this sounds very interesting. I hope that the both of you are good writers with a big imagination. Writing is one of the most difficult things. I am looking forward for this series you are doing. Bless it Be.

[GellarProdz]

The first banner is really amazing!

[GellarProdz]

Btw,only real Gaga fans will estimate it!

[Siennaleah]

I'm not necessarily a Gaga fan, I don't like all her songs, but i'm a fan of everyone's work on here

[UntalentedWarlock]

That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?

[ds7c]

That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?

The season starts with Phoebe, Coop and their daughter Kelly. In this episode they will need to join together with the other sisters again. We haven't made any plans about the season, we just write this episode at the moment.

[UntalentedWarlock]

That's series about Phoebe and her daughter ?

The season starts with Phoebe, Coop and their daughter Kelly. In this episode they will need to join together with the other sisters again. We haven't made any plans about the season, we just write this episode at the moment.

Okay. Full episode was has time like original episode ? About 40 minutes ?

[ds7c]

Okay. Full episode was has time like original episode ? About 40 minutes ?

Yes!

[Siennaleah]

I don't usually like downloading stuff, 'cause my laptop doesn't have very much space for that, is there any way I can read it in a different way?

[Admin]

I could send it you, if you PM your e-mial to my account.

[Siennaleah]

Love it, but sometimes I found it a tad bit difficult to know who says what.

[Oved011Again]

Okay, I know you are both very new at writing but I am going to give you some criticism and some criteria for you both to fix and improve your writing abilities. The manuscript and synthesize have very little realistic implications on how real professional practice or meaningful methods. This can be improved by reflecting on your experiential learning. I strongly urge to write more before publicizing such as writing more on your spare time whether it is something school related or what not. Through my introspective observations and clinical observation, I noticed that the characters that we know such as Phoebe and Piper do not fit within the same setting as we see them on television. This can be improved. I suggest you elaborate more on emotions, feelings, the setting and the physical position that is set around the characters. On interpretation of ideas-information, your conclusion consistent with a simple statement, this can be good and bad. I recommend you spend more time on developing more critical analysis such as making it simple but yet difficult. I know the idea is to prove that Lady Gaga is a demon but my question is. Does the writing convey clearly, accurately, and concisely the message that you as a writer want to send out to the audience? Is the general arrangement of the manuscript logical? Have you considered practicing in a different writing style? Typically, there are two ways of writing manuscripts and a story. One is writing is writing like a manuscript which consists of small focus on the setting and more focus on the verbal attention of the characters. Then there is writing like a story, a story is what your typical book would be, more focus on the action and setting and a good portion on the verbal communication.

[ds7c]

I know. It was my time that I wrote a story in english so it wasn't easy for me. But thanks for your advice

[VanquishedSpirit]

the link is broken.

[ds7c]

the link is broken.

Where could I re-upload it?

[VanquishedSpirit]

SendSpace doesnt keep files on there for long, so just upload to sendspace again.

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